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CHOCOLATE

CHOCOLATE

doc hildebrandt said
“milk chocolate is healthful.”
i love chocolate
i love    CRAVE milk chocolate
so    i ate a ton of it

had chocolate dreams
t shirt said hershey pa
it’s all that i ate 
then it came over the news
“mad doctor loses license”

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:39:00 PM

    Wow...dreaming in chocolate...now that's an obsession. Fun poem!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:52:00 PM

    Clever, funny work. Peace & Blessings Matthew anish

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:10:00 AM

    good ole doc hildebrandt. guess he got his license in candyland.

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 9:36:00 PM

    A lovely story poem with a touch of humor. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 9:27:00 PM

    hahaha, a story in your tanka. great fun, Daver. Anyway, DARK chocolate is the way to go!!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:38:00 AM

    Daver... ha ha! Only you! Only you!!!! your ending cracked me up... oooo! I love me moooooooooing milk mustache... lol.. xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 10:45:00 AM

    I love chocolate to......I eat not a ton but eat to much of (only Norwegian)milk chocolate....jummmi jummmmi mmm.... All coocolate will keep the doctor away....(?)...lol... - Have a sweet weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 8:14:00 PM

    If I start I can't stop so I stay away from the stuff and stay slim. The only way to win the battle. How's your waistline?

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:56:00 PM

    Ha ha, this is a funny piece here Dave! Such a creative and delightful write! I enjoyed this poem a lot! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Uh oh...I love chocolate too, Daver! They still say it's healthy, but mostly the dark one that tastes like bitter plastic.:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki