Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 9:10:00 PM
    Vicky This piece is so heart wrenching. The picture you painted of this disease is so full of emotion and feeling. The reader can feel what is inside your heart and soul. Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my January poem.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:00:00 PM
    The sacrifice one makes to care for one who cant care for himself does not go unnoticed by God, the sad thing here Vicky is in North America they tuck them away in some home where they can be easily forgotten, wonder what God would say to those folks, anyways great job here, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Vicky this is incredible! I could feel what were put into it. Thank you for this wonderful piece. Nicely Done!!!!! :-)

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:03:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:01:00 PM
    I can sympathize greatly, I have too, watched a loved one slowly change. I don't regret my past choices, but if I could do it again, I would have 5150d her, myself as the victim, out of love.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 7:45:00 AM
    very powerful! very much enjoy your writing. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 7:50:00 AM
    'For there’s no slower death than watching your loved one grow insane' Honestly, poetry at its best. it approaches climax at humane speed but does not leave it at all. The tempo, rhythm and emotional manouvre excellent. Keep it on print for chronicles please. MJS

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 9:45:00 AM
    Wow...the details are awesome...excellent write here..loved how you captivated my attention in every line..enjoyed...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 9:08:00 PM
    powerful write wishes...Joseph

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:23:00 AM
    Strong with smile....very well written Vicky. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 8:06:00 AM
    hi Vicky did you find my answer?In regards to your poem Very intense

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 4:46:00 AM
    Mara is a beautiful Romanian name, very old, I was amazed to find it in your poem. dramatic, indeed Imin like the end "…Save me from this agony Mara…Put me to rest. For there’s no slower death than watching your loved one grow insane. "

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:51:00 AM
    Hi Vicky,,, sneaking a peek... lol.. could not help once I'd seen the title... thank you... for your lovely support... xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 12:37:00 AM
    wow deep write,good luck Vicky

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 9:18:00 AM
    love the poetic madness, vicky!.. who will clean the toliet??, winning huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 9:17:00 AM
    love the poetic madness, vicky!.. who will clean the toliet??, winning huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:22:00 AM
    I like the humour in drama. You have to find humour in drama to live too or you would go nuts. Yes, life can be a circus when evil causes movements,because if life was perfect there would be no story.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 12:41:00 AM
    I feel this is terribly & edifyingly real for you Vichy- this composition,this terror in devotion is beyond imagination - You help me to remember what is imporatant - Death is ajealous thing,but also courteous - J.A.B

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Vicky, is this for the insanity contest. If so, I think you did a splendid job portraying the frustration of living with madness. I wish I understood what the judge wants from us with that contest. Talking about Hamlet and all. I hope the way you did it will wow him.