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Dark Dungeons of the Heart

Deep down inside, stirs a residual sorrow Amidst all things bright, the dark part Negativity breeds anxieties of the morrow These are gloomy places in the heart Without rains, where teardrops start! Sore, turn these painful abscesses Tattering confidence by daily wear and tear Depression building in chronic recesses Faith and dignity, a minimum thread bare Finding courage and strength to overcome, is rare. Shattered dreams, a source of trauma Multitude of matters lacking fulfillment Flowing lively stream of joy, paused in a coma Deserting the mind, all thoughts prudent Only the true calling of Love, could make an amendment. All one needs is a soul mate's affirmation of care Shackles of mental bondage to break free To overlook everything that's been unfair Lock and secure the dark dungeons with a single key Wipe off memories, throw the key deep down in the sea! 20/7/2012

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:08:00 AM

    Yesha congrats on your win, love it..David

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 3:38:00 PM

    A skillful and touching write BIG HUGS Congrad's on your fine verse winning big! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:09:00 AM

    gosh, here is one I had not caught sight of yet. I guess you recently posted it. What a great way to do "deep darkness" Why didn't I think to enter one of my poems on my husband's depression. I'm kicking myself now! Congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:12:00 AM

    a very stupendous write Yesha,i loved it when i first read it,very impressive,congrads on your win.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 7:44:00 AM

    congrats Yesha on a most brilliant write and win for this excellent entry on the heart..luv.. awesome one..

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 4:29:00 AM

    Agree....you have written it...well done Yesha. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:33:00 AM

    I love it a lot!Very good poem with indepth lines...Best wishes to you....

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Love can make the sorrow disappear at an instant.Lovely write.Good luck:)