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Emotional Thunderstruck

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Emotional Thunderstruck

No beginning..No end
I see your face infront of me
In everything I do
You`re the basic..the everlasting base

No music..No dance
Come on and let it show
That in everything you do
Comes with love for life and us

You pull out what`s piled up inside
Thunderstruck of emotions
Lightning from a clear blue sky
The feeling when I met You

Eternal burning flame,endless desire
A heart that yearns for more
You`re the basic..the everlasting base
No beginning..No end


A.Ertsland
July 19th 2012

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:55:00 PM
    And the thunder continues to roll and roll with emotions of true love....does it not? I remember it well....that feeling of being thunderstruck with love. ahhhhhhh...sweet memories. Love this poem...the lightning from a clear blue sky says it all for me. I like how you began and ended it with infinity.

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:21:00 PM
    About a love of yours? I wrote a sumilar poem in "stunned" .Nice metaphor in this poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Hi Arild always a pleasure to drop by and read such fine words from a master penman, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:29:00 AM
    Fantastic!! Arild!! I like this "Eternal burning flame..." such a gift you have....love ya, deb

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:56:00 AM
    how was our birthday girl's sweet moment?... sweet hello to you, arild.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 12:43:00 AM
    visiting your neighborhood to send my happy greetings today, arild... enjoy!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 1:39:00 PM
    "I see your face in front of me//In everything I do..." You capture the feeling we have for someone we love dearly, very well. Loved the poem. Suzette

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Arild, I can just imagine the blues, reality sucks sometimes but what can you do? Just embrace the memories :D love & hugs :) CTC

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:34:00 AM
    Awesome write dipped in that thing called love, enjoyed this write of yours this afternoon Arild :) I am doing great thanks, how are you? Love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:26:00 AM
    Hello, Arlid, awe... love the method you used here.. you began it the way you ended it..((<<---- lol,,, did not sound right... sadly it all has a razor end... one more thing.. Thank you for the little hello... always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Your are dipping your pen in the ocean of love with this beautiful tribute to an Angel. Well done brother. Enjoy your weekend also. Michael.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 7:59:00 AM
    you must have unpacked and relaxed by now, arild.. time for homemade vaffles!... happy saturday on rainy hours here!,,;) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 8:43:00 PM
    Yea Arild, just found out wifey is Anne Liese, I think it's wonderful to have a married couple writing poems here on Soup and this one is a hot number I hope you dedicated to her! :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Arild, beautiful tribute! jimbo ....and thanks for comments! I love'im!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Wow, Arild! Passion and love weaved into every line! This is so beautiful with just the right amount of intensity. Thanks for your always encouraging comments. May you and your beautiful wife have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:03:00 PM
    Well oh well, Arild, this reminds me of what I'd just posted.:) I think I'd been 'Thunderstruck' and hit by a lightning bolt at the same time.:) I enjoyed this write, thank you for the comment!! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Everlasting love. As pretty as the song, Arild! From the heart.

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 10:44:00 AM
    Sometimes that person that lets it pile up is a walking time bomb...Great work describing this emotionally charged person..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I haven't heard from Doris today..I hope that we get a call soon saying that the doctor has dismissed her to come home..Thanks for your concern and prayers..Sara

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:45:00 AM
    welcome back, arild...i felt the graceful progression through the streaks of love and life... so well written and conveyed! .. your vacation brought you to greater heights!.. wow!.. have a soothing friday!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 4:21:00 AM
    You have me emotionaly loving this, great write Arild :)

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