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Senseless Argument

The waters fragrance ,we cannot smell
The Winds color , we cannot see
The music's vibrations ,we cannot touch
The suns heat , we cannot hear
The Airs flavor ,we cannot taste
There is only one thing our five senses give in to
We can smell , see ,touch ,hear and taste love

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 12:53:00 PM

    I see you write about the senses, but other than I bit of punctuation please consider these things: water flavored with rose, mischevious smoke bombs coloring the wind as leaves ride the breeze, bass notes from a cello humming our chin, and smoke in the air, choking our lungs. These things came to pass in my mind as I read your work. I must admit I enjoy it's elegance.

    abdali Avatar mary abdali Date: 7/20/2012 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow, that was some good observation. i like how you think mary.:)