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Nightmare becomes the truth

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Nightmare becomes the truth

I dreamt one day you left,
Someone else had taken my place,
I would call that theft,
I frown as tears fall down my face.
I dreamt that you never loved me,
I dreamt you said you don't care,
I still loved you, but you couldn't see,
That I was always there. 
I never left your side, not once, 
But I dreamt that you chose another.
I felt so helpless, I felt like a dunce,
I thought we loved eachother. 
And then I woke up from that dream,
And realized it was real. 
You're love no one can redeem,
Your hate is what I feel.

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:43:00 AM
    I fealt the emotion and pain. I have been here as well. Love is what we all seek and what we all need. Good write I look forward to reading more!~Tammy~