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Once I Drank


Once I drank,
Know now I don't,
blissful lie,
now I won't.

Once I drank,
know now I can't,
thrice to die,
now I shan't.

Once I drank,
now I see,
life returned,
know now I'm me. 

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:57:00 PM

    Nice... you to put your feelings into words and allow us to feel the overcoming feeling you felt. Thank you for sharing it us.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:14:00 PM

    Ended with power. Very good piece on overcoming!

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 7:17:00 PM

    Hi David - Don't know if this is true or not, but glad about the ending. Thanks for your comment about my poetry. - Gail