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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 10:11:00 AM
    Wow!! i wish I had the talent to be so powerful, I mean I only write pieces that are actual moments or emotions, and yet lack that power presentation. Great write.. TC

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 9:49:00 PM
    Hi David, i'm a little late congratulating all my sisters past contest. I'm enjoying all the DARK EERIE POETRY TALES. entries..*Looks like it was a fun CONTEST* Thank you for the entertainment :-) very eeeerie of you... take care~PD

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "Dark Eerie" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:12:00 AM
    Big Congrats on this tortured win, David!!! I like it!! Reminds me of ya, Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 3:34:00 AM
    Nice bed time story for the grandkids David it'll guarantee a night without sleep, congratulations xx

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 8:00:00 PM
    Nice work, well done. thanks...Ken

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 7:44:00 AM
    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 11:44:00 AM
    am getting cold shivers just from reading this its kinder fascinating and scary.... Just dont want to be in ur head right now... Thanks for the comment on ma poem...

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 11:55:00 PM
    ah the lightest touch on ya shoulder, when old friends come on by, dad speaks thoughts in my head, yes here are the whiteants boy...

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 4:55:00 PM
    david, why are you so mysterious about your gift? (Susan wants to know too) And why do you think my poem is kind of creepy. haha. It is a nice fantasy(for me anyway) that a man would wait all day for me at my gate! (don't worry, I can see how you could think he was a stalker!)

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 6:05:00 AM
    David, this is a chilling write you got here. You brought the dark theme across brilliantly hey :) hope your week's been a great one thus far!! love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 2:14:00 AM
    Hola David, i can see lights from all dark places.. what is in there i don't want to know or feel... i'm pulling my hairs for you.. lol.. let me sleep! let me sleep!~ just having fun with your ending... :-) good night ~PD

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:55:00 PM
    Very interesting dark imagery, David. Is it for one of the dark contests? I sure wish I had an affinity for describing things in the dark. But I may be opting out of those contests!

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:55:00 PM
    And I see this is kimo. great way to use kimo

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Wow, David!...this is a new form I have never heard of...your poem is eerie but beautiful - Tim

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Kind of scary work that you have penned in this one..If this is for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I am glad that you are getting plenty of water in the UK but I know one can feel like that is enough..We have had rain again for which I am thankful..It is nice that my husband can cut off the sprinklers on the garden..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Doris called and said her surgery will be early tomorrow morning..Sara

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 11:55:00 AM
    I just love the detail of your incredible write my friend! The "screams of the dying" and "A dark state of mind controlled by static" such beautifully dark lines David! This is in a realm we seldom venture into, but our minds do go there at times, and it's scary too! I love your outstanding piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:30:00 AM
    wow David this is dynamic luv.. that cold kiss .. that scream.. it all blends so well .. such a grand visual luv.. best wishes .. this form is also a great way to express the meaning too ..

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 9:23:00 AM
    goosebumps!... an explosion of visceral images, david!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Oooo.. . Super... I've had nights like that... but I don't think I could have expressed them as well as you hav... Terry