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Evening Walk

Restless is the evening's song, so eager to release the throng of scented jasmine's sweet sachet. A first star takes my breath away... while clouds pile high like pink parfait with fringes gold in soft bouquets. Two lonely spruces thrash and sway in orchestrated breeze ballet, while dappled in the shadow's play, a weary earth turns shades of gray My silhouette is growing long..... as moonlight begs to come along.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Duo Rhyme Contest: Lovely invention of poems by Mary Port: Sponsored By Andrea Detrich

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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 1:29:00 PM

    A late congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:40:00 AM

    A well deserved win for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Hi, Sweet Beautiful Carrie Richards ~ Another Fantastic Picturesque Moment, By The Most Beautiful Of Gifted Girls ~ What A Wonderful Walk ... My Luv, Rachel *

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win for such a beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:56:00 PM

    What a beautiful picture.... Congratulations on this well deserved first place. Lee

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Carrie, this is an Incredible write! I love the beautiful imagery of night...congrats on your first place win. I am honored to share the spot with you (your poem is so much better)! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Dear Carrie - This is so lovely it is beyond comments. I am just sitting here drinking it in. Congratulations on your win. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 6:23:00 AM

    It felt like a Van Gogh! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 3:55:00 AM

    Congratulations Carrie a well deserved win.xx

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 2:05:00 AM

    Carrie congrats on your win, it is just beautiful, a well deserved top spot...David

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:15:00 PM

    This is WONDERFUL Carrie and I am so glad to see it take top honors! Congratulations. I haven't been able to be here at PS very much lately with my daughter's two operations and caring for my g.daughter who was 5 months old yesterday. Sure do miss all the beautiful poetry. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 6:45:00 PM

    Also, the way you ended it. Endings are very important with me and you had one of the best pair of final lines in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 6:44:00 PM

    I should have known this one was yours, Carrie. It was perfect in every way. Rhythm, rhyme, topic, imagery. Simply marvelous. Big congrats on your number one win in my contest.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 7:47:00 PM

    Ahh...I was all tensed up and now I'm relaxing...perfect 4 meter-8 syllable too...Beautiful, Carrie - Tim

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 5:26:00 PM

    Wow, Carrie, this is a tremendous write! I really enjoyed this incredible poem a lot! It drew me in perfectly and had my mind in complete awe all throughout! What a wondrous write my friend! Great Work!!