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Still Breathes

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Still Breathes

                                   Nothing left to see..
                           Ashes outline what's not there..
                                But a soul still breathes..

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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:05:00 AM

    Yes..I like that...saint Michael...he he he... and your little dog too... epic image...luv... inoccent me...pd

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 7:23:00 PM

    Oh wow...you never seem to amaze me...what a powerful Senryu you have penned here...love it..and I love your support...it means more than you'll ever know..INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 4:34:00 AM

    A really strong poem, especially the second verse. Bravo!

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Awesome MJF :) really not much more to say about this one.. love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:39:00 AM

    a glorious image Michael luv with a breathtaking result ..these words are outstanding .. JG in reflective mode today ..xoxo now and forever..

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:09:00 PM

    awesome, Micheal. I think exactly the same way.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:09:00 PM

    sifting through the ashes, so profoundly written. God bless, Cindy

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:41:00 PM

    There is life beneath the ashes, well done Michael keep stoking the fire of the written word, and that of life, luv vie

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:30:00 PM

    Wow, Michael, this is truly a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed the incredible powers of your words that you so illustriously written in this write! I love the line, "Ashes outline what's not there.." this says so much, this line, what a great voice you have! Awesome Work!!

     Avatar Date: 7/17/2012 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its a good thing hun. Hope you two are having a blast!!! Hugs Michael
  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:29:00 PM

    Good thing or bad thing Michael .. . . . . ??? :) :) - Just a hello from Turkey. - oxox love Anne-Lise