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Written by: yasmin khan

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forgotten remembrance


In
life's 
mad rush
I seem to
have forgotten my
uniqueness,my identity
conventional role of wife,mother has foreshadowed
the distinctness of my mind,soul, spirit coerced,restrained, freedom restricted,lost.

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Richard Palmer

Date: 7/24/2012 7:27:00 AM

great write Yasmin

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2012 10:41:00 PM

yasmincongratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2012 8:34:00 PM

WEll, this is a great way to do forgotten remembrance, my friend. A sad one with a most fitting title. I see it in on the winners' list. Congrats on your deserved win.

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 7/17/2012 8:23:00 PM

congrats yasmin on a great win for this fine write and entry luv..

Joseph May

Date: 7/17/2012 8:00:00 PM

congrats on your win Yasmin

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/17/2012 5:58:00 PM

congratulation,,,, Yes,,,, don't us females know this scene well,,,, getting caught up helping others,,,, getting lost in the shuffle,,,, have a blessed day Yasmin ;}

RALPH TAYLOR

Date: 7/17/2012 2:13:00 PM

Congrats, Yasmin. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. Thanks for you comments. hugs, Ralph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/17/2012 12:26:00 PM

This does happen Yasmin. You stated it very uniquely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

David Williams

Date: 7/17/2012 12:21:00 PM

yas, congrats on your win..loved this first time..David

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/17/2012 9:44:00 AM

Very interesting write Yas...Your words read so truthful...Congrats on the win! :o)

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 7/17/2012 8:59:00 AM

Yasmin, congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's contest today. Love, Gail

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/17/2012 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your #5 win in my contest! I'm not familiar with his form, but I think it works well for you here, "rush"ing (as you say) from the top to the bottom, to the gist of the poem, the inner you :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/17/2012 7:30:00 AM

Wonderful Fibonacci, and your uniqueness will return once the children grow.

David Williams

Date: 7/17/2012 2:37:00 AM

Yas, I like the retrospection in this. Stop and breath. You are not lost, you are unique!...David

nette onclaud

Date: 7/17/2012 12:53:00 AM

awh, we forget inner care when we reach out to others more than we should... love the poetic feel here, my mareey!... flap your lovely wings; splendid piece..:) huggs!

Yesha Shah

Date: 7/16/2012 9:25:00 PM

SAME PIINCH! as we did years back in school. Ouch! did it hurt? Sorry. Yes, this does seem to be way with we conventional women...hope to break that shackle in this life time and LIVE for oneself. This is one 'baring the soul' write in a great form! You are truly a great poet. I fav you today.

The Situation

Date: 7/16/2012 7:24:00 PM

conventional? whew!

The Situation Date: 7/16/2012 7:26:00 PM

ok i'll take it back.

Mystic Rose

Date: 7/16/2012 3:54:00 PM

Oh my precious one, with a little help from your spiritual muse, you will light up inside like a Christmas tree, I pray that you do, sending my love, and a virtual reality sunflower thought. HMMMM! Om! Vie.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/16/2012 1:30:00 PM

This is a great poem of your unique identity, whether it's lost, coerced, retrained or free...its all part of you! Awesome poem my friend! I enjoyed this form, it is a lot of fun to work with...sometimes difficult but it's achievable! I love this write! Great Work!!