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  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:27:00 AM
    great write Yasmin

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:41:00 PM
    yasmincongratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:34:00 PM
    WEll, this is a great way to do forgotten remembrance, my friend. A sad one with a most fitting title. I see it in on the winners' list. Congrats on your deserved win.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:23:00 PM
    congrats yasmin on a great win for this fine write and entry luv..

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:00:00 PM
    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 5:58:00 PM
    congratulation,,,, Yes,,,, don't us females know this scene well,,,, getting caught up helping others,,,, getting lost in the shuffle,,,, have a blessed day Yasmin ;}

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 2:13:00 PM
    Congrats, Yasmin. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. Thanks for you comments. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:26:00 PM
    This does happen Yasmin. You stated it very uniquely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:21:00 PM
    yas, congrats on your win..loved this first time..David

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 9:44:00 AM
    Very interesting write Yas...Your words read so truthful...Congrats on the win! :o)

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your #5 win in my contest! I'm not familiar with his form, but I think it works well for you here, "rush"ing (as you say) from the top to the bottom, to the gist of the poem, the inner you :)

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 7:30:00 AM
    Wonderful Fibonacci, and your uniqueness will return once the children grow.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 2:37:00 AM
    Yas, I like the retrospection in this. Stop and breath. You are not lost, you are unique!...David

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:53:00 AM
    awh, we forget inner care when we reach out to others more than we should... love the poetic feel here, my mareey!... flap your lovely wings; splendid piece..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:25:00 PM
    SAME PIINCH! as we did years back in school. Ouch! did it hurt? Sorry. Yes, this does seem to be way with we conventional women...hope to break that shackle in this life time and LIVE for oneself. This is one 'baring the soul' write in a great form! You are truly a great poet. I fav you today.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:24:00 PM
    conventional? whew!

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    ok i'll take it back.
  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:54:00 PM
    Oh my precious one, with a little help from your spiritual muse, you will light up inside like a Christmas tree, I pray that you do, sending my love, and a virtual reality sunflower thought. HMMMM! Om! Vie.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 1:30:00 PM
    This is a great poem of your unique identity, whether it's lost, coerced, retrained or free...its all part of you! Awesome poem my friend! I enjoyed this form, it is a lot of fun to work with...sometimes difficult but it's achievable! I love this write! Great Work!!