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Just Call I'll Come

I crossed the mighty water
When I heard you call my name

Found you waiting at a castle
Where the Red Dragon breathes it's flames

In the cold wind, rain and thunder
You came running to my arms
Screaming take me away forever
They can't buy me with their charms

As I held you tightly
I asked where that we should go
Take me home to Bridge Town
On our white charger Vivaro

So we crossed the mighty water
Far from dragons, wind and rain
To the love of all your own Kin
Where the children know your name

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 2:39:00 AM

    An excellent flight of fantasy! Your construction of two couplets followed by three quatrains is so effective. Marvelous flow, imagery and rhyming. BRAVO, my friend!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:01:00 AM

    Hi Jon just a knight in shining armour my freind and your words the sword, excellent, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 4:20:00 AM

    Jon, well done I like this a lot..David