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Air, Aligned

I wonder how many times a day
Our breathing patterns coincide,
As if my source of life, and yours,
Conspired to keep us both alive.

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  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:37:00 AM

    Very beautiful Annie, sometimes very few words are needed to create such an emotional stirring thought! Peace x Ruby

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Annie - This is an incredible notion written in your artful style. Kathy

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:30:00 PM

    and a super title too! :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:28:00 PM

    Wonderful... your faultless cadence and off-rhyming are sublime. A unique take on the symbiosis of a lasting relationship.