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Make up World

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Make up World

Never alone in a make out world 
with her face pressed upon a window pane 
her breath exhaling a misty dew 
with a finger letters she writes 
drying up once a shine glass 
inhaling the air 
deep into her soul 
breathing the letters of your name 
on her heart.

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 11:27:00 AM

    *.* Sounds like she's may be making out with her lover perhaps while gently pressed against the glass ? Beautiful Dawnie & if so then its probably during the evening hours while no one is around; Awesome - Also, thanks for the lovely visit, so precious - Luv, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:31:00 PM

    ‡ This Is Beautiful Beautiful Dawn * I Could See Your Precious Loving Beauty Standing There Amid Twilights Embrace In The Still Of The Quite Restive City * Mesmerizing * 'Breathing The Letters Of Your Name On My Heart' * This Line Alone Would Warrant A High Place In Faves; Extremely Beautiful * My Luv, Rachel ‡