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Is this what you call living

Inhale  and exhale
 wish he would save me
From this hell

Shout  and scream 
I bet you have no I idea what I 
mean

Sob and cry 
I Wish he would have never 
said goodbye

Toss and turn
 for him I will never again 
yearn 

Speak and whisper 
He tore up my life like a big 
O'l tWister  

Jog and run
I bet he had alot of fun

Well I just want him to know 
His ignorance 
is what brought 
me to this hell 

I just thought I should tell him
The tears I cry 
I'm gonna kiss goodbye
they aren't meant for him
And I'll never again care 
what he do
 
Well I just thought I should 
pass along
To Him
The only thing that went wrong
was him
It was him
Who brought all his problems 
along

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Ayla. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:33:00 AM

    Ayla super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:27:00 PM

    Wow....I can really feel the emotion in this poem. The emotions are deep, and I can relate to this in some ways. From past ex"s but I am happyily married now... Jane XoXo

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 7:22:00 AM

    congrats on an excellent write and win luv.. nicely penned piece..

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 7:03:00 PM

    sad write, the greatest gift in life is to be happy,no one can do that but you,Ayla