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Jokers Lament

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Jokers Lament

eyes of deepest blue
lips sweet as maple syrup...
his dog loves him too

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:35:00 PM

    lol...i love this..pd

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 11:40:00 AM

    Very sweet indeed! Juniper

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 5:31:00 PM

    so cute! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:29:00 PM

    sure enjoy seeing this one again. Thanks for my place in your contest today, Carol.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:04:00 AM

    Very sweet senryu! loved it Carol..

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:38:00 PM

    Love is not restricted to the human race as you show in this fine haiku. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 6:56:00 PM

    Very nice! Like it.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 4:19:00 AM

    A MAN FOR EVERY WOMAN,MAY I NOT BE BUT A MAN FOR MAY I BE,TO THE WOMAN. WORDS FROM THE HEART WHAT MORE CAN ONE ASK FOR,NICE PIECE CAROL

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 3:13:00 PM

    What more could a woman ask for in a man. Descriptive write. thanks ofr the comment on Depression

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:26:00 PM

    So cute, Carol!! Glad to see a new poem up from ya.

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:07:00 PM

    probably taken.

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Too good..

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 12:06:00 PM

    oh, how succulent this is, carol with an ending that charms this page!... greeat job.. thanks for your encouraging cheers; they mean a lot to me.. love and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:32:00 AM

    I like easy reading poetry and hope to see more like this. I had to smile and laugh at this one, so it is a good humour one.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Reading your works is like talking to nature. I wish the best in your writing.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:53:00 AM

    I love your sense of humor .... Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 9:31:00 AM

    Sweet! :) Love, Tammy

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Thank goodness for a good dog. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 1:35:00 PM

    If his dog loves him, he gotta be cool. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:38:00 PM

    lol, love this witty one, Carol

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Great senryu. Wit and a lovely image of blue eyes.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 10:05:00 AM

    lol. cute piece :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Very cool, Carol! I love a good senryu.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 1:22:00 AM

    Lovely. Well said. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 5:40:00 PM

    so i can picture a poetic mind churning and coming upon a few words that are quirky but at the same time inspiring....it takes real talent to put those two sentiments and mesh them together into a simply delightful poem here's hoping chicken litttle isn't correct in his assumption PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 11:44:00 AM

    Carol, you got me laughing here tonight.. Enjoyed your write :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 11:07:00 AM

    What a marvelous write my friend! You have compiled a very glorious piece here Carol! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:22:00 AM

    Nice on Carol!

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 4:47:00 PM

    Interesting senryu..If one's dog loves them, they must be a fairly nice person..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 3:09:00 PM

    I love your Poetry because it's short and sweet :)

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