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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:21:00 AM
    Thanks for the chuckles this morning, John.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Hi Gwen excellent had me laughing best read for days love it, go Dribblin Betty, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:39:00 PM made my day with the huggy wuggies....gosh I fell in love with the baby term.... you...are my age...right... loop de loop... You are awesome Rix.... Wish we could talk or hang out more here on the soup I bet it would be pd

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:01:00 PM
    I love this...the anticiaption, the shape, the possibility of it all. Victorious poem!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:44:00 PM
    12 foot, WOW! :) Love a sweet success story. When someone finally achieves some glory. An underdog that's 12 foot high. Just makes you want to go out there and try.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 12:40:00 AM
    Lovely story - very nicely told. I love the part where the teacher's jaw hit the floor-quite funny, ha!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Hey Gwen, I absolutely enjoyed this tonight.. You sure brought this piece to life.. Hope your weekend is a great one :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 6:37:00 PM
    As only the PaperClip Queen can write. Wonderful piece my dear sweet friend. Luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 2:34:00 PM
    rousing piece , gwenie... you managed to keep the sense of movement and action throughout, AND made the whole message poetic.. your muse is alive, yes!.. i can;t comment on blogs!.. awwh, the TPS glitches!..:) love and hugggs!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:06:00 PM
    How NEAT that you too loved Bread!!! That song If was sung by my sister's boyfriend at a church dance. He was standing there singing and he dedicated the song to her!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Gwen, I know nothing about basketball but this seems to be based on a true character? You sure brought the excitement of the sport to your poem. Very nice story !!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 9:58:00 AM
    Oh, wow, Gwendolen, the incredible nature of your glorious write is stupendous! I can't believe the flow of your poem, so perfect, it was totally awesome my friend! I really enjoyed this amazing write, and a very memorable poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 9:48:00 AM
    Gwen, wacky just wacky, I love it..David

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 8:34:00 AM
    All I can say is brilliant loved it it made me smile :)

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Ha, ha, wonderful story and rhyme. Delightful!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:33:00 AM
    Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Gwen. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:30:00 AM
    loved it,awesome poem,have a great day,loved reading this this morning

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:19:00 AM
    Enjoyable story of Betty.Nice finish!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:02:00 AM
    You bring out the excitement of the game so well with these lines, and the image of the giraffe scoring lingers!! :) Jag

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:02:00 AM
    I enjoyed your poem, interesting and beautifully versed, have a great day Gwen, luv vie