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crystal rain

Purple hues of twilight  fall
As crystal raindrops drip from the window sill
A golden oldie is playing down the hall
that fills the heart with a sentimental  thrill

Then comes the blackness of the night
With ghastly  ghouls and  ghostly sights
But in the white light of the dawn
All the dark fears are gone
Red roses  glisten  with the morning dew
Pink hibiscus welcomes bumble bees  too

Morning gives way to a red hot noon
When marmalade butterflies flutter and swoon
As gray clouds in the distance loom
 Heavy rains give shades of green a liquid boon
Rain concludes giving rise to the sun's amber glow
Illuminating a plethora of colors that paint  the rainbow
Evening  brings  forth majestic  orange sunsets
The golden yellow moon will rise yet
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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 7:34:00 PM

    You covered all of the colors. Nicely. I enjoyed it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:14:00 PM

    Joseph, love the win and poem...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 4:03:00 PM

    Marmalade butterflies....awesome....Poem and congratulations Joseph....

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Joseph,.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/16/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for my placement Skat..
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:21:00 PM

    colors and imagery galore - who could ask for more... Congrats on a winning entry... Jake

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 3:43:00 PM

    Joseph, lots of contrast and great imagery... love the marmalade butterflies :) Congratulations on the win

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:04:00 PM

    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:09:00 PM

    JOSEPH.... congratulations... from:Linda

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/6/2013 4:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for my placement in your contest Linda
  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:21:00 PM

    Joseph, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I enjoyed the rainbow of color and emotions! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:42:00 PM

    A wonderful write, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 2:51:00 PM

    congrats on your win with this delightful poem! :) Tanya

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 4:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Tanya
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 2:48:00 PM

    Very enigmatic and poignant. Congrats on Your win Peace and Light

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Anne
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 2:36:00 PM

    Oh my lovely phrases [marmalade butterflies ] Congrad's on your win. Light & love

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Debbie
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Joseph, congrats on your win in Tracie's contest today, this poem is so stunning!! Hugs, Gail

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Gail
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 9:10:00 AM

    congrats Joseph on a spectacular write and win for this colorful poem luv..

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Linda
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:39:00 AM

    Joseph congrats on your win, excellent..David

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks David
  1. Date: 7/26/2012 3:16:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery here Joseph love the "marmalade butterflies" congratulations on your win xx

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mandy
  1. Date: 7/14/2012 1:49:00 PM

    Joseph, beautifully written, great use of imagery.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/14/2012 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sherese
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:12:00 PM

    I am wondering if this is for the darkness contest. It fits really well with that theme. wonderful!

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/13/2012 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea...this for Tracie's contest..
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 8:38:00 AM

    A beautiful scribed poem Joseph, it says so much onto the soul journey of the heart, I love the golden oldies in the hall effect, good write, I'm dying to find out, what was the song that was playing? If you don't mind my asking? Just curious, Vie

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Vie....the song was hey there lonely girl..
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Joseph. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/13/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carol...
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:34:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poem, Joseph. Great vivid imagery. Love, Kim

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/13/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kim
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:27:00 AM

    Very beautiful poem...enjoyed...Marty

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/13/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you marty
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:20:00 AM

    Beautiful poem with very nice imagery Joseph.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/13/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Kash