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The Miser And The Model



The miser and the model
are a couple, you might say,
yet they don't speak to one another,
she treats him like a brother,
how to add a little romance 
and excitement to their day?

He forgoes his prime obsession
and decides on a surprise
for his delectable companion
with such sadness in her eyes.
He promises forever, 
no more secrets, no more lies.

As a miser he hoards money,
as a model she craves size,
so he gives up on his stinginess,
forks out three thousand dollars
to provide her with 'an extra lift,'
she gives her man a hug and kiss
'cos she is thrilled to bits!

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:54:00 PM

    Can I get in line? Nobody ever gave me anything like that. You are sweet enough to make a girl lucky when you bring one to life in a poem.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Have you been reading gossip mags again ,,,,, I very much liked this write,,,,, blessings of the day Keith ;}

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 8:31:00 AM

    This was a very fun poem from you. Just picturing how a miser ever ended up with a model is quite a feat!!! But stranger things have happened. My hubbie and I are like sun vs. the moon!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:04:00 AM

    Looking good. Right?

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 12:38:00 PM

    laughing out loud, keith...your words come alive in heaps of humor..perfect quill!..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 9:43:00 AM

    Ha, ha, this is a wondrously compassionate write my friend! I really enjoyed this elaborate piece of art Kieth! The miser was so kind to his love, they would make a great pair if they can see what just happened! Brilliant write! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 8:42:00 AM

    Just the lift I needed..... the poem I mean, nice words man ;-) Read

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Made me chuckle, enjoyed reading.

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:05:00 AM

    Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Keith. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:42:00 PM

    great pen Keith I so love what you pen!