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recovery starts small

Tall pines, burnt forest
Devastation of soot and grief
Blackened bark, smokes
Winds whisper as time passes
Among the decay, seedlings

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/24/2012 8:48:00 PM
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    Raskin, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 8/4/2012 7:38:00 AM
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    Dear Raskin, "sparks" of hope in such devastation is lesson for us all. Lots said in 5 brief lines. love, Kathy
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    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 7/24/2012 6:04:00 AM
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    Tragic when these fires happen; they are so difficult to contain. This ends wth a spark of hope, "seedlings". Best wishes, Mikki
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/13/2012 2:28:00 PM
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    Amazing how nature came replenish itself..We had a fire here about ten years ago that burned about 800 acres..It is solid woods now..Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/12/2012 1:01:00 PM
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    I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Raskin. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 7/12/2012 7:40:00 AM
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    excellent! i like this very much.

    bobbins Avatar raskin bobbins Date: 7/12/2012 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks! I'm a fan of resilience and new growth.
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/12/2012 7:30:00 AM
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    raskin, nice lines of life after devastation..David


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