FORGOTTEN PATH OF LOVE by nette onclaud


kash poet Date: 9/7/2012 2:40:00 PM Basically I am a technical person.Electrical Engineer.Trying to combine poetry with Engineering :(
Maria Paz Samelo Date: 7/29/2012 11:11:00 PM congrats!!! keep up the good work :) Mary
Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/22/2012 10:38:00 PM nettecongratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
Dan Kearley Date: 7/18/2012 2:10:00 PM Congrats,on this very fine write...I love your wording. :o)
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/18/2012 6:01:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 7/17/2012 8:19:00 PM congrats Nette luv on a terrifice win for amazing woeds ... hope to be back full steam next week ..
RALPH TAYLOR Date: 7/17/2012 1:57:00 PM Congrats, nette. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
David Williams Date: 7/17/2012 12:17:00 PM Nette, congrats on your win.I like this one...David
Joyce Johnson Date: 7/17/2012 12:06:00 PM Sad but hopeful too. Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/17/2012 7:28:00 AM Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest! I like how you described forgotten love, a betrayal, yet something good came from it :)
yasmin khan Date: 7/17/2012 7:02:00 AM congrads to you on a wonderful win Priya..is it Penelope cruz on the spanish side,my fav,also salma hayek......,come to india to discover your roots maareey...
kash poet Date: 7/13/2012 8:41:00 AM Beautiful Sedoka here Nette.Missing so much your poetry!
DON JOHNSON Date: 7/12/2012 4:59:00 PM touch of sadness, touch of pain, lifes mistakes relived again, poignant is the night...
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2012 7:09:00 AM Lovely written nette....we have a warm holiday with sunshine and alot of splashing in the pool....:) - home in Norway it is raining :( - oxox huggs Anne-Lise
kash poet Date: 7/11/2012 7:33:00 PM Replace your computer!!!!!!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/11/2012 4:56:00 PM wow, what a beautiful sedoka. I see you did Susan's theme. I sure hope to do one this nice!! it's great to see you here, Nette. Luv, Andrea
Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 7/11/2012 3:43:00 PM What a lovely arrival,dear Nette:-) I like the how this sedoka speaks to me.So many of your writes have that unique voice, just like a great musicians have their own sound.Thanks for stopping today my friend.Appreciated it very much:-) Huggs,Arild
yasmin khan Date: 7/11/2012 1:36:00 PM was just thinking about you ,missing you when I see your comment.will get back to you,hve to go.
Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 7/11/2012 1:23:00 PM I couldn't help but notice the long 'a' assonance sprinkled through your first three verses... nice! '...path of forgotten love,' so sad. That being said, there is hope expressed here that all will well. Marvelous imagery and word use! Best wishes, Keith :)
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/11/2012 1:12:00 PM It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Nette. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
Joann Grisetti Date: 7/11/2012 12:44:00 PM Lovely set of sedoka. Pregnancy is such a special gift.
Russell Sivey Date: 7/11/2012 12:17:00 PM Wow, quite the spectacular write my dear friend! I really loved the line, "womb kicks in tenderly" very impressive line Nette! Your descriptions are yet again truly the wondrous words of art! Such images created! I love your poem immensely! Great Work!!
Rachel St.Cross Date: 7/11/2012 12:07:00 PM ‡ Ps. There Is Just Reasons Dark Elements Amid Life, Internal External, May They Co-Exist Until Their Purpose, Has Thus Been Fulfilled Did I Ever Tell You, How Very Beautiful I Think You Are. ‡*
Rachel St.Cross Date: 7/11/2012 12:02:00 PM ‡ HE Pours These Waters As Blessings, Upon Into & All About & If A Bird Does Not Escape This Eye Than Surely How Can This, A Precious Child, My Sweet Beautiful Nette * Truly, One Is All & All Are 'One' For, How Else Could These Beauties In Truthfuls Light, Ever Be... * The Unborn Child, The Lioness Amid The Desert, Leviathan Within The Waters, The Stars & Moonbeams, The Bird Upon The Ground, Angels, 'You & Me' * This Is A Very Beautiful Poem As Always, Beautiful Nette * Stirring Your Words, Gripping Their Splendours * My Luv, Forever, Rachel ‡

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