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Sweet Half and Half

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Sweet Half and Half

Behind my house, sweet Pretty beckons me with leafy swaying arms, and I succumb. I go to where she stands and hear a hum. Examining the heart of her, I see a swarm of bees that hover happily. For what she has, they eagerly have come, and blossoms burgeoning now give them some. So common, yet peculiar is my tree. . . She ought to be a willow, so then why does an adornment of pink blossoms show on only graceful branches hanging low? However, her top limbs are poised high. That other half is reaching for the sky and wearing charms of white like flowered snow! July 11, 2012 For Craig Cornish's Sweet Contest

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  1. Date: 8/30/2012 10:01:00 AM
    sounds like mistletoe to me Andrea but could be wrong, anyhow wonderful poem, love those first two lines.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Well this IS a jewel and I'm sure we will all see you in the winners circle. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 1:31:00 PM
    Good to see you've entered Craig's contest Andrea.. got to do well with this..!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 10:18:00 AM
    compelling yet tender in its expression, andie.. congrats!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 8:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super well deserved win in Craig's "Sweet" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:08:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea, great win!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 7:06:00 PM
    I love this poem and how you gave your tree a name and your descriptive write about her.......congrats on an awesome win! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 5:50:00 PM
    Hey,Congrats on your win in the contest!!!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:40:00 PM
    congratulations on your beautiful win.

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Andrea , congrats on your great win, loved it first time..David

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Can't get any sweeter than this! A beauty to enter in the contest with my best wishes Andrea! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 3:47:00 PM
    A great entry Andrea. Sweet as its poet. Wonderful sonnet. Missing u but I am back. Luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 2:17:00 PM
    Interesting work..Leaves me with questions..Reads like a very unusual tree..Reads like winning material for the contest..Good luck in Craig's contest..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 2:16:00 PM
    I love this tree sonnet, my friend - she sounds like a beauty : ) My favourite tree is quite hollow and would look dead if it didn't have leaves - it's rumoured to be a hanging tree

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 11:39:00 AM
    Wonderful sonnet you have penned. I need to try and find time to try some new forms. Get stuck doing the same ones. Wrote a poem and lost it but luckily I wrote down most of it so will post it again this weekend. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 5:42:00 AM
    Sweet sonnet from Sweetie Andrea! Failed attempt from my side for a good alliteration. Best wishes for the contest.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 3:28:00 PM
    Very "sweetly" done, dear Andrea. Your sonnets always knock me out. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Sounds lovely!! And yes, it has been a while. I'm in zombie mode...work, work, work. I may be posting some weird poetry over the next few months. Ha. Always enjoy yours, Andrea!

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 1:35:00 AM
    Love this SWEET poem very much Andrea!!A sure winner!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:15:00 PM
    How oh how can this not be a winner???!! This is such a beauty, Andrea! I love it!

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