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FRIENDSHIP

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FRIENDSHIP

Friendship is a thread
Made of trust and affection
Easily breakable 

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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 4:10:00 AM

    Jay great haiku, stopping by to say good night~PD

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 1:32:00 AM

    Well said. But strong friendships, cannot be broken. Tks

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 9:34:00 AM

    A marvelous HAIKU, well conceived and rendered! Best wishes, Keith

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/14/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:28:00 PM

    Well said, but you have one too many syllables in your last line. How about replacing "breakable" with "severed"?

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/13/2012 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/12/2012 1:49:00 PM

    Well written haiku, jk - oxox Anne-Lise

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/13/2012 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:40:00 PM

    It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today JK. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/12/2012 12:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 10:18:00 AM

    your friend ship is strong,in JA friendships are made from cob-web,lol great write Jayachandran

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/11/2012 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:15:00 AM

    I think it is not easily breakable if it is a strong friendship, but you are right about friendships that we often find online, they can be easily breakable! even good friends can sometimes break!

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/11/2012 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:04:00 AM

    There is a delicate balance of beauty in your haiku Jay, loved it, v

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/11/2012 7:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 11:32:00 PM

    True friendship means trust.Cant b broken if understood:)

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 7/11/2012 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk