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Too late for the 7-7-4 thing, but thought I'd throw it out there anyway

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Too late for the 7-7-4 thing, but thought I'd throw it out there anyway

Rhyming is not hard for me.
Neither is light poetry. 
Lucky that way.
OK, the stanza count's three.
Rhyme scheme is A A then B.
Lots more to say.
Where is this going? We'll see.
Dr. Suess seems to guide me
along the way.

Once upon a time's cliché,
memories of yesterday.
Then it got hard.
Do I want a fish filet?
Why can't I just run away
from my backyard?
Society has its sway
like seven syllables, eh?
Sometimes it's hard.

Yeah, so back to my backyard:
vinyards, retards, and en-guards
go with the flow.
Charcoal leaves nasty black chards
even grandma sometimes farts
those in the know
get it that … yep, can be hard.
Or soft, whatever. My cards
go for gusto.

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  1. Date: 5/25/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Very witty and remarkably clever. I like your twisted sense of humor and the confidence you have to let it go on the page. I am inspired to delve into a little poetic craziness when I read work like it

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:36:00 PM
    Kash and Carrie (no pun intended) liked this, and so do I. I see Nette liked it too for the same reasons.

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 4:44:00 PM
    Love the tongue in cheek and wit that is profound in the sounds of your poem!! :) Ps...and thanks very much Nancy for appreciating my poem in your recent challenge. A nifty theme idea it was!! Thanks so much!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 11:55:00 AM
    g;ad to see you getting revved us again, soul sistah!!.. are you sure the contest is done?.. haven't been around for days as my computer gave up on me, lol!...:) get it on!!.. greeat stuff! :)

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 8:27:00 PM

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 9:27:00 PM
    A full seven for you........

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 9:26:00 PM
    Enter this in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 9:25:00 PM
    Terrific....the contest is still running....check contest page......

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 9:25:00 PM
    People are finding this form hard..........I guess.

    poet Avatar kash poet
    Date: 7/9/2012 9:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This was my 2nd comment but it came 1st here!