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II I Could Fly 2

if i could fly 
i would never cry
about how this world try to fry
all the spirit from my life 

i would never cry
about the trials
keeping me behind 

no, if i could fly 
i would take my tired eyes
to the deep valley of strife
and fly away to the mountain high

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 12:27:00 PM

    awww when i'm feeling out of sorts with life i dream up stuff to write. this one and the other came off the top of my head. i'm just glad i didnt have to write like a manic up to ten or more before sanity took it place in my thinking. i certainly need a vacation. going on a 8 day cruise in November can't wait. if God wils it.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 12:16:00 PM

    nice write Barbara,need a vocation,lol

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 11:48:00 AM

    Yes, those mountain top experieces can eliminate all those down to earth problems..Great way of expressing the idea...Sara