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Liquid

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Liquid

Liquid

As the liquid completes his body
The mind calms to a halt
Knowing the calamity of the world has stopped
And what his soul defines as peace
Starts to set in
While trying to inflate the emptyness that lies within
If only for a short quivering space in time
The harshness and the unrighteous of his journey
Fades to a distant reality  
Which is all he needs to give him that taste of peace in his life again


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  1. Date: 8/7/2012 11:37:00 AM
    Wow. Your way with words is astounding. I believe I've a new favorite poet!

    Flanagan Avatar Tammy Flanagan
    Date: 8/8/2012 1:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you for your kind words! :) ~Tammy~
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 4:41:00 PM
    Tammy, nice piece keep the rolling. Cheers.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 12:40:00 PM
    ‡ Nirvana, And Peace I Give To You * Changes The Entire Paradigm Of Vision, Dear Beautiful Tammy * Very Lovely As Noted Below, Extremely So * My Luv to You, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 12:34:00 PM
    nice Tammy,lovely