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Tormenting Bite of Thy Serpent

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Tormenting Bite of Thy Serpent

Seductive creature
Fangs, whose venomous liquid
Has tortured my blood
Slithering it's way
Into my heart, Biting
On the forbidden fruit
Teasing and tickling
With your taunting serpent tongue
Orgasmic tears flow
My face is flushed as
The serpent laughs at my
Misery; Ha, ha, ha
My skin is pale, but
I can still feel the serpent's
Scales slide upon me
Now it constricts me
Intoxicating, lusting
The taste of my blood
I, slowly fainting
Give into the slithering
Nympho's bite; Pleasured
I lie on my own
Orgasmic waste, as the
Serpent preys another
I pray, the next
Victim seeks pleasure
In the serpent's bite
As I did

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  1. Date: 7/11/2012 5:36:00 AM
    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Elena. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 07/11/2012