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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:49:00 PM

    A desert landscape perfectly described! Beginning and ending the piece with 'pale,' and placing the 'sands too hot to touch' in the middle is pure genius! Well done, Joann!! Best wishes, Keith :)

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:27:00 AM

    I can see waterless mist rising.

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:53:00 PM

    This is a fabulous and delightful poem my friend! I rather enjoyed your clever write of the moon, I can imagine this moon in the desert right after an incredibly hot day! Just perfect to cool it down! Awesome Work Joann!

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:38:00 PM

    Hello, Joann... ..the gentle beam of the moonlight should be able to cool that desert pealing look. Nice, or should i say deep image... always a pleasure ..pd

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:33:00 PM

    wonderful imagery.