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Elusive Dreams - a shadorma

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Elusive Dreams - a shadorma

                                                      Rainbow dreams
                                                         elusively drift
                                                           out of sight,
                                                       slipping through
                                                   reality's stark fingers,
                                                     never fully grasped.


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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Love it! Hope I can do one half as wonderful. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 6:07:00 PM
    and that the way it is.

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 2:09:00 PM
    Great one..Very expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:59:00 PM
    a wonderful poem Kim...thanks for sharing...hugs..Joseph

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:43:00 AM
    beautiful :-)

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 5:25:00 PM
    nice one, kim! very beautifully expressed...

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 10:39:00 AM
    beautiful write, Kim - interesting form too (I must try it)

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 8:50:00 PM
    KIm, i love your verse...pd

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 8:48:00 PM
    Reality should be more kind! I seem to dream in black and white. I love your shadorma! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 7:39:00 PM
    this shadorma is SUPERB. Wish I'd thought of this!!

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:24:00 PM
    Lovely poem; rainbows are slippery things.