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Some days I long for that time
You and I met outside
On your evening break and my workdays end
In the lot, a quarter from the end
I sat on the weathered bar
Soaking up the evening sun
While you stood in the shade
Under the adolescent tree not too far
Smoking your cigarette
While I carried on about my day
You observed me in your quiet nature
Smiling as if I amused you in some way
And I paused as a child does
When he becomes aware
Of his viewing audience 
In his playful affairs
I rested my chin upon my arms
Lounged on the bar, glancing off shyly
But in the corner of my eye
I saw you smile more widely
Finding delight in my loss for words
The smoking orange glow dove for the earth
I turned my head as I saw you step from the tree
Knowing that peaceful moment had gone
As it had each time previously
I hopped from the bar to find I was wrong
                           You kissed me

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  1. Date: 7/22/2012 1:16:00 PM

    ‡ Stopping Back By This 'Beautiful Kiss,' Sweet Beautiful Brandi * Where Has Your Beauty Been ? Don't Stop, Pour Your Love Upon The Page ... My Luv, Rachel ‡

    Simpson Avatar Brandi Simpson Date: 10/11/2012 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Rachel!
  1. Date: 7/7/2012 7:32:00 PM

    ‡ Sooo Romantic & Sooo Beautiful, Beautiful Brandi * Tis A Wondeful Tapestry Your Loveliness Has Weaved * I Cry At Movies Which End Amid Love's Wonderful Happiness * I'm Just A Big Baby But, I Sure Love Love * Luv, Rachel ‡

    Simpson Avatar Brandi Simpson Date: 7/7/2012 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This poem is about the first kiss I shared four years ago with the man I'm still very much in love with. *true story*