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Eyes

Eyes are the window into the mind and the soul 
This I have been told
But look into the eyes of senility; 
See the void of empty space; Feel the cold

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  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:36:00 PM

    yes Donald it is so sad to see this scene and my hubby and I visit seniors a few times a week and see this often.. nicely penned luv.. truth is so revealing ..

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 6:14:00 AM

    This is very cool, Donald!

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 4:14:00 PM

    This is so true...I'm a caregiver for my dad and that look does seem cold and lifeless. I'm forever asking....Are you there?? He's in and out of this state. You captured the look well.

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Good write Donald...enjoyed.