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Drunks

Drunks,

 Stay in Funks

No longer look like Hunks

Use Sidewalks for Bunks

 Get beaten up by Punks 

and though they have Lost it All

 They,ll be in the Bodega Tomorrow

 looking for some Alcohol.

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  1. Date: 7/19/2012 7:19:00 PM

    Nice write and very true!

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 8:36:00 PM

    Donald, I just read the first 5 or 6 of the poems on your blog and got the impression of seeing you in a coffeehouse on open mike poetry night reading these poems aloud. You'd fit perfectly, and would no doubt be extremely popular. (you might want to lose many of the commas in your writing though as they're unnecessary!)