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A Broken Heart

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A Broken Heart

           A promise to be together is broken,
just not a promise but my soul
      which always loved you,
no matter how risky it was for me.
     I traded my heart in return for 
your love
           ended being betrayed and totally
broke,
wreck me completely but not my
     heart ,which is always for you
 and awaits you.
Living happily with someone
      in the castle ,built of our memories'
is a death bed to me.
Just for second ,could not you see
what you are to me
           Listen to my broken heart,
what its saying to you.
         Take a step back and turn back
around and see where I am,
           holding pieces of my heart
in  hands.
     You could not see tears in my ears and
now you are making me cry.
           How could you just walk away from my life,
from me crushing my soul.
        I will die for you every day ,
to see  you alive.
you were my valentine for a lifetime
   and  you are gone leaving me
in miserable pain.
Atleast tell me how to live without you.

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  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:31:00 AM
    emotional piece but it hits close to home for everyone in general. thank you for your positive words to me as a new writer and I hope you too have found your strength

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 10/20/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much and have a great day
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Aww! Emotional piece.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/20/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much and have a great day.
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 9:28:00 AM
    a lovely write, as i read each word here penned, tears roll in my heart's eyes,i understand the pain, i hope it is not true and just a poem for sure

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 5/29/2013 3:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for reading and yes its just a poem.have a great day :)
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:54:00 PM
    so heart rending words,Congrats.....Seren

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/4/2013 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much :)
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
    you really showed us a broken heart with yours! Congrats for your win.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/2/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much :).
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Congrats...:-) Donna

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/2/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much :)
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Congrats, Kenisha. Excellent. Nice going. Happy Easter. Ralph

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/1/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much and happy Easter have a great day :)
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:13:00 PM
    Kenisha, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 3/31/2013 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much .yes its really hard to deal with the broken love but we should never let go hope .
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:22:00 PM
    i ca really feel the pain in this poem..very well written and i hope that person described in the poem finds his/her love.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 11/27/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:56:00 AM
    Vary emotional write. Sad. Well penned. Tfs

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 9/19/2012 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much.
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 9:13:00 AM
    The name of the pain is "the pain of absence of loved one", it inspires to live life one side and kills from the other side. It's mysterious. Wonderfully adorned. Loved always, bl

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 9/5/2012 12:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much dev.have a great day :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:25:00 AM
    painful but truly nice poem, well penned Kenisha! Hugs - Laila

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/31/2012 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Laila.have a great weekend :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:41:00 PM
    A passionate rendering of a broken heart speaking. Such a sad song. Cynthia

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/23/2012 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for reading and posting a comment.:)
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Quite an emotional poem..nearly make me cry...nicely penned down..with best wishes, Watisungla :)

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/19/2012 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much.have a great day :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:10:00 AM
    having had my heart broken recently ur poem resonates well deep with me...good stuff with emotional understanding

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/17/2012 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .wish your broken heart heals soon.
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:05:00 AM
    A very touching well penned...Thank you for your comments on my page.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/15/2012 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for reading my work too.happy independence day :)
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 11:54:00 PM
    you express your feeling in this nice poem..thanks for sharing :) have a nice day!!

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/7/2012 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for reading .have a nice day :)
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:49:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this poem full of feelings..thnx for stopping by..best to you:) Jag

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/6/2012 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 10:19:00 AM
    Please check your soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:59:00 PM
    It's very moving and sweet,Kenisha.Thanks for congrats!

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 8/2/2012 12:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for your words.
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