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CRIME ON A GUN

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Below is the poem entitled CRIME ON A GUN which was written by poet Jermaine Kirimi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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CRIME ON A GUN

                
             a     Crime is but a vengeful word that splits us open like a cadaver impairing our
                '''Normal routine with vengeance greed impure thoughts that leave our 
          neighborhoods in fear the rage that is felt only suppressed to us with pain
       not able to express
    not able to relive 
  not able to control
  the unjust use
  of armories
  the use of a
  G......U......N

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  1. Date: 7/7/2012 4:09:00 AM

    Nice shape poem - serious theme. The unjust use of guns can never be understated.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 5:36:00 AM

    loved this poem,I live in Jamaica where people think its the easiest way to solve problems,great write Jermaine,love the design....

    Kirimi Avatar Jermaine Kirimi Date: 7/6/2012 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    been listening to news of late and all they talk about is crime ,guns were found too much but Mr palmer do keep safe