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A Heart Ajar

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A Heart Ajar

A heart ajar
a dream half seen
in a chest
whose lid was 
quickly fastened. 

A heart ajar
a smile half 
delineated 
upon a flake 
of snow
which in 
no time melts.

A heart ajar
a long beautiful sentence
whose verb 
never dared 
to come out 
in the light.

A heart ajar
a poem half read
before you reach 
its climax
and touch 
its heaven.

A heart ajar 
a love 
drawing near
like a ray of sun
you try to catch
but will
always flee.

Love 
and it may
open, 
though. 

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:41:00 PM
    My hearts ajar with love for this poem. Well done! :) Tanya

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 7/30/2012 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much. I try to keep my heart ajar too!
  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:07:00 AM
    Thanks!

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:06:00 AM
    Thanks!

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Dreams are fleeting, eh? But reality is such a bore. loved each stanza of this jewel. daver

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 7/9/2012 2:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:58:00 AM
    This is nice. I love the different scenes you've portrayed to build up to the conclusion.

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 7/9/2012 2:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:23:00 AM
    Sweet write .Its true that when heart opens up completely,it is bound to feel the pleasure and the pain:)but try we must.

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 7/9/2012 2:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:18:00 AM
    You humble me ...yes with my blessing and peace to you. You may read more of mine at http://theptp.wordpress.com/

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 7/9/2012 2:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Steven. I'll post it!