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Blue Mountain Tears

Blue Mountain Tears

fallen angel wing
upon still crystal water
frozen peaks loom

deborah burch©
07/04/2012

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    Date: 7/16/2012 3:39:00 AM
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    Hi Deb, stopping by to wish you a happy good night.. nice poem~ LUV*PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/13/2012 12:59:00 AM
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    oh, another one of my favorites here. Congrats. this is truly a nice one.
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    Marty Owens
    Date: 7/12/2012 10:24:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed reading...Marty
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/12/2012 7:44:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/12/2012 7:27:00 AM
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    Cap'n Deb super congrats on your win, love it..David
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 7/11/2012 7:58:00 PM
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    Deborah, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/11/2012 6:55:00 AM
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    I agree with Tim. The imagery of that peak with its fallen angel wing is WOW
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 7/8/2012 1:36:00 PM
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    A stunning piece of work, Deborah. The body is elegant, but the title is the real kicker for me - Tim
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 7/8/2012 10:10:00 AM
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    Stunning imagery Deborah ;) how are you doing? Hope your weekend is a great one, love Wilma
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 7/5/2012 9:25:00 PM
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    thank you for the support... always~pd
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/5/2012 5:03:00 PM
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    Cap'n Deb, excellent work, I like...David
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    kash poet
    Date: 7/5/2012 2:52:00 PM
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    Very good haiku here Deborah.Best wishes to you.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/5/2012 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you Kash! I am honoured ...hugss, love ya , deb
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 7/5/2012 1:32:00 PM
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    What a gorgeous, cool write my friend! The temperature must be frigid at this mountain, the image you paint gives a cold lake vision! This is a beautiful poem Deborah! Great Work!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/5/2012 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    dear Russell, you are such a doll...:) thank you sooo much ....huggsss, love ya, deb
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    tristen temple
    Date: 7/5/2012 1:30:00 PM
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    ..."In My Minds Eye I Find Myself Strolling Joyfully Within This Pleasant Place, My Dear Precious Sweet Beautiful Deborah *.* Spotting Suddenly A Beautiful Fallon Angel With A Damaged Wing; Weeping While Gazing Into The Heavens *.* Walking Up To Their Beauty, Smiling, Bending To Offer Her This, 'Kissss Of Everlastings Love *.* Luv,'" Tristen :)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 7/5/2012 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *blush* you are such a romantic ;) lol...thank you sooo much for your kindness...hugsss,deb