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Rapture


I see you in the starlight,
I hear you in the breeze,
your face is with me everywhere,
I fall down on my knees.

I pray with all my heart and soul
that you'll be by my side, 
forever 'til the end of time,
as constant as the tide.

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  1. Date: 7/28/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Honesty rewarded by the pain of Love - I'm sure this work is cherrished - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:33:00 AM

    I truly love this one ;}

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:03:00 PM

    oh, and the "blank verse" one. Also VERY nice.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:02:00 PM

    after your sonnet this is my second favorite of the day. Love the rhythmic flow and romance of it.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 6:42:00 PM

    You have bought tears keith, love this can relate to it in many ways... I have had so much loss in my life in life & death...

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 1:17:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 1:00:00 PM

    I pray with all my heart and soul That you'll be by my side Forever 'til the end of time As constant as the tide

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 12:48:00 PM

    This is a truly wondrous write Kieth! I was impressed with the awesome message you have portrayed here! It was very inspirational, I have some ideas for a couple of poems of my own to write now! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Perhaps you can change the word and to the word To in the second para 1st line, I think it would be nice to add to this luv vie

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 12:09:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Romantic and engaging poem Keith, thank you for sharing luv vie