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Skeleton Tree


knobby tentacles
begging an angerly sky
dead by lightning bolt

©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
July 5, 2012

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Imaginative images in so few words! Terry

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:41:00 PM

    LOL, Love this Haiku. This is for me the best Haiku I have ever read. Haiku's don't usually appeal to me but this one is genius. I love it. It will be going in my favorites.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Wow..."knobby tentacles." Have to keep reading after that inviting descriptive line. - Gail

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 10:16:00 AM

    A wonderful image and...and story too!! Good luck in the Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 8:45:00 AM

    Had a tree fall in the last storm, it really was begging to go, youre absolutely right!

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Your style is so engaging! I noticed the assonance you create with 'tentacles begging...dead.' Super job!! Best wishes, Keith :) (PS Good Luck!)

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Excellent piece. :) good luck in the contest! ------Ell

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Winner material..Good luck..Enjoyed reading ..Sara