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Orion

Hot shot
Sworded swagger
Flashing boldly unconscious
Glommed to center of attention
Easy to spot.... (not hot)

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Written by Nancy Jones on the Fourth of July, 2012
For Nette's "Pen a Pensee" Contest
Grammatically questionable, and includes words I made up since there weren't any existing words available to say what I wanted.
Really enjoy star gazing :)

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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 2:09:00 PM

    SOUP MAIL! :)

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Got to admire the spirit you show Nancy.." there's more to communicating than dogma!! well done..!

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 4:43:00 AM

    I also to enjoy it Nancy. Good luck in the contest. Peace and blessings to you.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 1:29:00 AM

    Good one Nancy.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 1:27:00 AM

    nice poem on this constellation of the greek hunter, Orion. - JH