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Searching for Gold

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Searching for Gold

distant clouds of gray -- smooth brush strokes illuminate effervescent waves golden sands reflect sparkling shades of jewel-kissed sky -- high tide sprays solar flares old woman stands hunched upon the drifting shoreline -- gray eyes search the sun

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  1. Date: 7/20/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Very expressive and descriptive work...((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:54:00 AM

    wonderful! I especially like the one with the old woman and her gray eyes! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 12:29:00 PM

    congrats Rhonda on a magnificent win for words painted so beautifully in this scene luv..

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Oh, another beauty..I am fast becoming that old woman..lol. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:31:00 PM

    Excellent imagery, Rhonda! Congrats on your win! Kim

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Big Congrats , Rhonda!!!!lovely imagery...especially your picture of the old woman and ..."drifting shoreline--grey eyes search the sun"...wonderful depth...well done, love ya, deb

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Rhonda congrats on your win, love the image of the woman searching the skies...David

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Nice that you brought the human touch. What is beauty if it is not beheld? Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 9:39:00 AM

    This one is unique I especially love the image of the old woman hunched over with grey eyes searching the sun, it humanizes the entire poem, congrats on your special win Rhonda, peaceful thoughts of you, Vie.

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 9:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 9:23:00 AM

    Rhonda, congratulations on your win in my contest today luv. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 1:43:00 PM

    3rd captures me! Rhonda....jimbo

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 12:55:00 AM

    Rhonda superb.....David

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 2:55:00 AM

    Wonderful imagery in this haiku Rhonda.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 9:45:00 PM

    I absolutely love that last one. The others are also wonderfully descriptive, Rhonda.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 9:39:00 PM

    I just love the "sparkling shades of jewel-kissed sky" line, it is so descriptive you couldn't miss the image it creates in your mind! Your whole poem is so grandiose, I really enjoyed the peacefulness of the whole piece! Great Work!!