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Mountain


our mountain cabin

     nestled near calm glacial spring-

          a squeaky ole bed


             
                 By Gwendolen R.
                
                     7-3-12

                          For PD's Mountain Haiku Contest

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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 8/15/2012 7:39:00 AM
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    Cynthia BuhainBaello
    Date: 7/17/2012 1:46:00 AM
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    Cozy Haiku and vivid scene (and sound). Prolific write!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 7/13/2012 12:36:00 PM
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    congrats Gwendolen on a superb write and grand win for lovely sentiments luv.. Ron still typing for me.. will be back next week hopefully luv..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/13/2012 1:01:00 AM
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    Gwen, this is the third one toward the bottom which has been one of my very favorites in the contest!! I just love the way you snuck that squeaky old bed in there. Congrats.
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    olusegun Arowolo
    Date: 7/12/2012 12:38:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest by PD.Nice Haiku..well deserved.....And thanks for all your encouraging comments on my works....XOXO....
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    Marty Owens
    Date: 7/12/2012 10:27:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest...cute Haiku...enjoyed...Marty
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/12/2012 7:46:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Gwen. Love, Carol
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/12/2012 7:28:00 AM
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    Gwen congrats on your win...your prize of a can of oil is on the way I believe..David
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 7/12/2012 6:35:00 AM
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    Lovely haiku, congratulations on your win!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 7/11/2012 7:58:00 PM
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    Rix, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 7/4/2012 4:53:00 PM
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    It is your love for the outdoors that makes this haiku so much enjoyable..i can visualise you sitting on the squeaky bed and writing poems ! jag
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 7/3/2012 8:17:00 PM
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    I want to go there!. Lovely setting.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 7/3/2012 7:17:00 PM
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    What a beautiful scene you paint here with your illustrious descriptions my friend! Do you have one of these cabins? I could only wish for something as wonderful as that! I'd keep the windows open all the time too! Sorry I haven't put snappers up as my avatar...I've just been quite busy...I know excuses, but really school is kicking me in the tail! We are ready to watch Red White and Boom tonight, got my trusty laptop to do schoolwork whilst having fun! I hope you are having a good 4th! ;)