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Mountain


our mountain cabin

     nestled near calm glacial spring-

          a squeaky ole bed


             
                 By Gwendolen R.
                
                     7-3-12

                          For PD's Mountain Haiku Contest

          

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  1. Date: 8/15/2012 7:39:00 AM
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  1. Date: 7/17/2012 1:46:00 AM
    Cozy Haiku and vivid scene (and sound). Prolific write!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 12:36:00 PM
    congrats Gwendolen on a superb write and grand win for lovely sentiments luv.. Ron still typing for me.. will be back next week hopefully luv..

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:01:00 AM
    Gwen, this is the third one toward the bottom which has been one of my very favorites in the contest!! I just love the way you snuck that squeaky old bed in there. Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 12:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest by PD.Nice Haiku..well deserved.....And thanks for all your encouraging comments on my works....XOXO....

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest...cute Haiku...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:28:00 AM
    Gwen congrats on your win...your prize of a can of oil is on the way I believe..David

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 6:35:00 AM
    Lovely haiku, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:58:00 PM
    Rix, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 4:53:00 PM
    It is your love for the outdoors that makes this haiku so much enjoyable..i can visualise you sitting on the squeaky bed and writing poems ! jag

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 8:17:00 PM
    I want to go there!. Lovely setting.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 7:17:00 PM
    What a beautiful scene you paint here with your illustrious descriptions my friend! Do you have one of these cabins? I could only wish for something as wonderful as that! I'd keep the windows open all the time too! Sorry I haven't put snappers up as my avatar...I've just been quite busy...I know excuses, but really school is kicking me in the tail! We are ready to watch Red White and Boom tonight, got my trusty laptop to do schoolwork whilst having fun! I hope you are having a good 4th! ;)