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Soliloquy



I am left foaming thoughts - 
a ship without a Captain, at the mercy of 
unpredictable winds.
Meandering thoughts 
like an unreliable compass      
lead me into unknown seas.
Lost says that defeated voice in my head;
lost echoes the  ominous voice that I dread.

Broken  waves of dreams, dancing fancies
that I dreamt, like mist to the sun’s light,
gone.
Pale paling, fading vapor into frosty silence, 
you and I split in the middle;
our dense, muting laughter no longer 
covering the reality, you and I torn apart
One minus Two
without death 
we part.

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  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:50:00 PM

    Soup Mail...

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 4:54:00 PM

    Sad that lovers part...Great way of expressing the idea..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden Date: 7/6/2012 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara. Keep writing and I will keep on reading.
    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 7/6/2012 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sherese, Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara
  1. Date: 7/4/2012 7:21:00 PM

    Thanks for all your nice comments, Terry.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 3:56:00 PM

    Nice images... Nice poem! Terry

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden Date: 7/6/2012 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Terry.
  1. Date: 7/3/2012 5:28:00 PM

    very nice Sherese..... always ..Joseph

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden Date: 7/6/2012 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph. Keep dreaming and writing.