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HIDDEN UNLIKELY ANSWER

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Below is the poem entitled HIDDEN UNLIKELY ANSWER which was written by poet Donn Ronquillo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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HIDDEN UNLIKELY ANSWER

one sighs,
deep down the answer lies.
why i do it?
comes to me bit by bit:
trying to find an answer,
calling out to whoever,
getting nowhere.
wondering why?
still i try to fight,
even though it's out of my sight!
crying for some understandings,
like a bird with no wings.
i try to fly,
then take a dive.
then i just die,
i still try to strive.
no matter how bad it is,
no matter what diss.
i try to forget,
and just let.......

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  1. Date: 7/4/2012 10:41:00 AM

    It was a pleasure to read your work! Lori

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 3:17:00 AM

    The answer lies within - isn't that almost always true? Nice rhyme!