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Gales tale

I once had a friend yeah called gale
Yeah she was just like no body else
She used to date a guy called dale
Who eventually became her spouse
Untill the is the relationship went stale
She lost everything, also the house

She said it happened last November
Never did he have a care for her need
She said she was glad it was all over
Though never was he one to take heed
He was never the sort to stay sober
But she would always follow his lead

Though she said he's now in prison
And Im told chances of poral are slim
But asked did she made the right disison
She was glad she was nolonger with him
As it seemed like a complete mission
As the days just seemed wasted and dim

At first she siad he was quit striking
But he just went completly off the rail
It all became just a little bit too freighting
She said I hope he don't ever get bail
And hope he too stops bloody writing
And this was actually her own little tail

written (2002) not best effort otriginaly I scapped
but decied to keep again as work in progress a look back
idea inspierd by frien d back in june july 19999 a friend 
also gilr I was seeing briefly at time some different subject matter at tim
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,GALES TALE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 

              

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  1. Date: 7/12/2012 9:40:00 PM

    David, "this is a hurtful little ballad to read about Gales tale. so much emotions and left behind pain. seems so unreal. How can one stand all these emotions and troubled turmoil of bad deeds?? some tail she left behind in this tale.. excellent..pd