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Footles 4


Union man.

Liking 
Striking

Non-union man.

Hating 
Waiting

Pregnant mom.

Breast fed
Well fed

Pregnant dad.

Breast fed
Well fed

Home baking.

Aching 
Caking.

Home DIY.

Wrecking 
Decking

Keeping fit.

Slimming 
Trimming

Not keeping fit.

Shunning
Running

© 3/7/2012

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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:45:00 AM

    ha ha David, I'm still awake... and there is no sign of life here on the soup.. Is this a bad time to be on line... gees...i have not slept... your footles are slimming trimming my mind... wreaking decking my brain... this form seems fun.. never tried one... ta ta ..TEX

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 8:46:00 PM

    hey, you are doing them now too!! GREAT, DAvid. I always see so many similarities in our humor! My favorite ones here are the last one, and the pregnant ones!! (hmm, I see Yasmin saying nobody does them. I might need to get some more of my footles out!!)

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 1:58:00 PM

    oh I like footles but nobody does it nowadays ,thanks for this most enjoyable footle..cheered me up no end.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 1:00:00 PM

    This is such a fun write my friend! I always enjoy footles, they are so creative and interesting! You have such wondrous footles here, especially the Pregnant Mom...then the hilarious Pregnant Dad! Oh that got me there! Thanks for a pleasureful read! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 12:40:00 PM

    You tell a story in segments here David, enjoyed your poem luv vie