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The Lilies of Her Love

Untying times pink ribbon from amid her golden hair....

As standing afore love's looking glass; slowly removing

Silks perfumed negligee; kissing softly, her cherry lips'

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...."The Lilies of Her Love" ~

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  1. Date: 7/10/2012 6:50:00 PM

    Love it,,,short and sweet ;}

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 5:36:00 PM

    I like this, thank you for your lovely comment x

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Oooh! A sensational poem

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:49:00 PM

    Very romantic poem John...

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 7:50:00 PM

    Filled with anticipation..passionate write... Good job as always, Tristen. Thanks for the visit. Happy 4th of July! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 11:54:00 AM

    i get lost in the mist of your soft sensuality, tristen... goosebumps!... lovely!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:11:00 PM

    sensuous and delicate passion prevails tristen luv.. and oh pink is a favorite color of mine.. u must have read my mind.. spicy words to steam the heart and war, ther soul.. another amazing treasure luv..

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:45:00 PM

    This poem is quite incredible, I love the images that enter my mind! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Encompassing the dove! Loved it Tristen! Peace and blessings.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:36:00 PM

    this one is very romantic and passionate. loved it. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:00:00 PM

    So sweet and romantic poem tristen - love it. - well done - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:45:00 PM

    Lovely, this is to be cherished, have a great day, hugs vie

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Passionate..Sara