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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 10:06:00 AM

    Refreshingly different. Well done. congratulations Nette. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:24:00 AM

    Nette, congrats on your win, love it..David

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 3:44:00 AM

    i meant feel :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 3:43:00 AM

    Lovely fee through words dear Nette.. A beautiful poem indeed-Charma

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 9:44:00 PM

    A beautiful summertime Villanelle(my favorite form). You capture the essence of how many of us feel during the "giddy months of summer." Thanks for sharing Miss Nette! :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:21:00 PM

    wonderful atmosphere aglow in these lines penned Nette luv.. u are so great at all forms luv.. best wishes if for a contest.. I hit my head on iron rail today havd slight concussion..huge headache too.. running after pups.. now they are running round me and Ron is singing to me.. dont know if I feel bedtter or worsee luv..

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 7:53:00 PM

    Very good poem on a tough form.I think it is for the contest of country fair.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:38:00 PM

    Great story of a fun time at a Carnival or Fair..Good luck in the contest, if an entry...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 1:38:00 PM

    sigh!what a nostalgic one Priya,made me yearn for those lost years of childhood,it was so much fun when the fair came to town,you have written a fabulous villanelle,no one can touch you on this,the bestest ever!reading this is like being there!

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 11:42:00 AM

    I love the juicy eyes part Nette, you dance a villanelle around like nobody's business girl, your poems are like a pirates treasure, if you dig deep you find the hidden treasure, ah what revelation you are, my love always, vie

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Wow, the aura of this fine write is incredible! I just love the summer nights especially when there is a fair in town! There are many memories of when I was a child and going to a fair, whether it be a county or state fair, and playing games, eating special foods, just having a great time with my family! You have brought back all these feelings in a flood through your perfect poem my dear friend! This is a fantastic write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Delightful read,Nette!! What a lovely day in the park,with all the joy a good summerday shares with us:-) Smiling wide after reading it."ingat lagi,dear Nette;-)

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Reads like a vicarious trip to any of the theme parks nearby. Good form.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 10:30:00 AM

    I love this poem...it resonates through my own memories. Beautiful! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 10:29:00 AM

    Beautiful nette......goes a littel to and from my laptop and suitcase...traveling tomorrow morning...holiday!!!! :) - love Anne-Lise