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The beast within

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The beast within

You once made my heart beat,
but now you have created a beast,
a carnivore blood thirsty beast,
monster as the killers from the east.

You reaped my heart out mercilessly,
made it bleed out so profusely,
made a mark that is scared deeply,
you are a monster but always a beauty.

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder,
but excruciating pain lie in the beholder,
a grim ill be in you life as a reaper,
to taker you heart out cold but colder.

Now i understand why we make love,
but we never actually fall in love,
a night pleasure in words  a  beast,
you have created within the beast.

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 5:39:00 PM
    I really feel this one, I going through something similar right now and the quote of the east send shivers down my spine. Great writing. Jon

    Kirimi Avatar Jermaine Kirimi
    Date: 7/5/2012 2:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks i went through the same as well.its from the heart
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 3:05:00 AM
    Powerful words, your poem moved me, made me think each time I read it. Fantastic work.