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Below is the poem entitled Moving on which was written by poet Sherese Gooden. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Moving on

The din of cheers will die to dusk, in life
the dance will end; we  take the bow
from this tall tale - goodbye to strife
at end of day- our story’s done now
we say, we had our chance, we had our dance.
Shall I now say you had me in a twirl-
locked in your embrace I felt my once
shy moves – slow waltz in time; but now that girl
you knew, to your final tune will dance no more,
will dance no more – for life is calling- the sequel
must begin; who knows where it will lead, what store
of dreams will unfold the applause we crave, or quell
the tide of hope that’s bubbling, in spring awaiting
that season of reaping to glorious sunshine, minds mating.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:11:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your featured poem this week Sherese. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 7:46:00 AM
    Sherese, I am going through your poems and I am enjoying the writes of an excellent poet. Thanks for your encouraging words and feel free to stop by me any time. One love! Joy Wells.

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/15/2012 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for appreciating, Joy. Please drop by anytime.
  1. Date: 7/14/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Hi Sherese great sonnet love it, all the best Owen

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/15/2012 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you did, Owen. Stop by any time.
  1. Date: 7/4/2012 4:02:00 PM
    Very nice... Terry

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/15/2012 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Terry.
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 11:01:00 PM
    Nice sonnet Sherese...enjoyed!!!

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/1/2012 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 10:02:00 AM
    didn't you have two more poems?..

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 6/30/2012 6:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I just checked and they are really not posted. What could have happened? Is this the usual pattern, here today gone tomorrow?
    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 6/30/2012 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes I did. They are still there.
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 10:01:00 AM
    nicely penned Sherese... Joseph

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/1/2012 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup Sherese..enjoyed your morning read!!

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/1/2012 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 4:32:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup Sherese - this was a pleasant written poem - well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/1/2012 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 11:15:00 PM
    welcome to the soup with this nice poem,another Jamaican nice

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/1/2012 5:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi yardie!
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Welcome to PS! Cool Sonnet and look forward to reading more of your poems.

    Gooden Avatar Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/1/2012 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.