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Love and Care - Collabration



                             Its easy to become what you fear..
                 Could bring you down,or shift you into high gear

                          Embrace the hope you see in others..
               A neighborhood filled with loving sisters and brothers

                              Love and care for eachothers..
                      Always a helping hand and some leftovers

               Smiling faces in the streets,children playing in paradise
                     Come on over,check it out while we roll the dice..  








June 29th 2012

Anne Lise & Arild Andresen

* Collabration with my lovely hub

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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:44:00 PM

    Love it Anne,,,, but I think this is not your Paradise poem, ? thank you Anne for always reading my words xoxo ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2013 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox // love from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 12:17:00 PM

    you write so well together : )

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2012 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jack, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 10:35:00 AM

    A wonderful rhyme poem again about love. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2012 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:23:00 PM

    Lovely collaboration Anne Lise - lovely message!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/26/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vicky, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Oh! lovely atmosphere, well done. i too deserve the World so. Thanks......... for this wonderful poem of few words. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2012 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bl. - thank you for visit and comments - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/9/2012 3:31:00 PM

    Anne Lise & Arild....Lovely and moving write!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/8/2012 11:38:00 AM

    Nice to do a collabration with your hub. Lucky you that he loves poetry. My husband would look at me like --are you nuts--anyway enjoyed the poem from both of you. We were talking about Norway and the beauty of the fiords the other day and it got me thinking of you and how beautiful some of your area would be. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/8/2012 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Phyllis, yes Norway is beautiful but cold.....welcome! Thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/2/2012 12:08:00 PM

    this is beautiful.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/2/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tania, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/2/2012 11:40:00 AM

    A beautiful collab from two of the most beautiful people on the soup who are so right for each other in every way because both of you have beautiful hearts and beautiful minds....love to both you and your Arild!God bless you both.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/2/2012 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yasmin, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:32:00 AM

    I love this Ann, fear is such a theif!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/2/2012 2:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    kerry, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 10:47:00 PM

    Wow! Look at you two! Is this your first collab? Very nice... And very uplifting.. Great job! :o)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/2/2012 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dan, thank you for visit and comments. - Yes the first. - oxox f.e.f. love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 3:09:00 PM

    This has a good vibe in the wording.....nice collabo!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2012 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    T.S. - thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 12:21:00 PM

    have a warm sunday even if it's cold, anne!...huggs to you!..:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is cold !!!! (comming) - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Anne Lise & Arild....well done! I agree! I always cook xtra food to share!!! God Save Norway! (We have mucho citizens of Norwegian ancestry here in the great free state of Minnesota) jimbo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2012 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jimbo, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:45:00 PM

    sorry no crap games.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2012 5:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    T-S - thank you for visit. - oxox Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 4:49:00 PM

    Yes, take care of each other. I love that! Thanks Anne-Lise. You always have wise words to say. I love it. Have a great weekend too. Love ya, Toquyen :))

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 2:04:00 PM

    I can relate to this poem on so many levels. It's so hard to be positive when all your living around is negative energy. I'm from a place where a smile can be your olny friend. Thanks for the smile Anne.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andre, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 11:06:00 AM

    some simple thoughts ,but very worthy in our day to day life .thank you for sharing .jk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    jk. - :) thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Anne Lise - So happy! love, Kathy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kathryn, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 8:40:00 AM

    A write filled with love and compassion by you both. Loved the message in it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yesha, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Lovely Anne. Great work and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ravi, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:12:00 AM

    what an affectionate write from a pair ruled by wam love.. enticing me no end, anne and arild!...:) grreeeat job!.:) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, thank you for visit and sweet comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 4:15:00 AM

    dice it is indeed. ;-)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 4:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    G.G. - thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 2:44:00 AM

    A VERY LOVELY WRITE

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jermaine,thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 2:43:00 AM

    collaboration in answer, my lady love and I, are both smiling from ear to ear. We thankyou, great poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 9:35:00 PM

    GREAT ENDING TO A LOVELY POEM!! AWESOME Anne Lise and Arild Anderson :-)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Doreen, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 7:38:00 PM

    Some words and thoughts to considerthat help us to get along in this world. Hice one myfriend!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 5:58:00 PM

    A lovely neighborhood. It gets so muggy here no one goes outside in the summer. i moss the playing children.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 5:25:00 PM

    It sounds like a haven I would love to explore, thank you for this uplifting poem to both of you big hugs, vie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vienna, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 5:20:00 PM

    Great work that you two have penned..Creative work from two gifted pens...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/30/2012 2:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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